Evaluation Question 3

3. What have you learned from your audience feedback?

First Draft of Music Video

What worked well about our Advanced Production?



Ancillaries
"...artistic and sophisticated..."
"...eye-catching..."
"...look real..."
"...good to look at..."
"...convey his independance..."

Music Video
"...keep audience entertained with fast paced editing..."
"...amazing use of green screen footage..."
"...female character convey post-feminist traits..."
"...varied camera shots..."
"...varied locations..."
"...narrative is clear..."
"...convincing performers..."




What didn't work well about our Advanced Production and what could be improved?



Ancillaries
"Inlay text covers image..."
"Use different Inlay images"

Music Video
"...slow down the rate of some edits..."
"...smoothen up the lip-synching..."
"...smoothen up some of the outlines around some of the green screen performance..."
"...shoe walking bit a little jaggedy to look at. Fix up pace."
"...replace some of the green screen footage at beginning, breaks pace."
"...needs a stronger running motif..."

After the intial feedback process from the presentation evening and our peer assesment we came to a conclusion that there was still a bit to do. We fixed up the music video by adding additional scenes and fixing up lip-synching among other things. The Inlays got a complete re-vamp and look completely new. I learnt that it was necessary to keep a stronger consistency between the Ancillaries and Video. The video is described as "artistic" and we wanted to keep that same style throughout the ancillaries which meant the feedback was essential towards the finishing touches. I learnt a lot from feedback, that many people can different interpretations out of one thing; different people like and dislike different thing too. Feedback allowed us to refine all those comments so that our production could work well for the majority.

Final Draft of Music Video